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However, this convincing architecture is partly betrayed by the development of the contents: the text has a notional approach, which however lacks well-explained examples, which help the reader to better grasp the advice briefly cited.
Furthermore, no reference is ever made to what the Japan phone number list tone of voice is, to the elements that make it up, the difference with the brand voice: all the basis necessary to understand the suggestions proposed below. Finally, the opening of the conclusion is identical to the introduction, indicating a lack of reworking, and the Tone of Voice subject is repeated a full times in just two pages.
Provides excellent insights, on which it would be necessary to work better to create a useful article. In summary: an article written well in terms of structure, but extremely didactic. With information that remains on the surface and is never explored with concrete examples or facts. Rather trivial conclusions and useless repetitions. In short, as Alessia says at the end, the text is "correct but does not shine".
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